Elizabeth Bolton

[lizzbolton]

About You
Name: Liz
Age: Not Allowed to Share
How'd you find us?: East High - Home Of High School Musical

About Your Character
Name: Elizabeth Eileen Bolton
Age/Grade: 14/Freshman
Gender:Female
Birthdate: September 19, 1993
Canon or Original?: Original

Appearance: www.agirlsworld.com/rachel/hangin-with/pix/mileycyrus.jpg
Height: 5"4
Weight: 150
Eye color: Blue
Hair color: Brown

Personality: Elizabeth is a very sporty and unique girl . She be friends anyone and just like her brother she loves the sport of basketball . She is just like her brother but alittle different . She dressing preppy and sporty . She is very friendly and tries her best to achieve things . She is a very good friend and sister to Troy .
History: Elizabeth Eileen Bolton is the little sister of Troy Bolton and is just like her brother but alittle different . She is very smart and loves basketball and surfing . She loves her brother and is on the East High lady Wildcats . She is devoted to studies and basketball . She loves reading , listening to her ipod and chilling out . When her brother had the whole musical thing she reacted very well and was very proud of him . In the first movie she was away at an all girls basketball acadamy called BBall For Girls and the second movie she was has just come back for summer. She likes Gabriella and is very happy Troy is with her.



Family: Coach Bolton Dad , Mom , Brother Troy Bolton
Anything else?: Nope !

[Troy Bolton]

Many problems here. I understand why you can't tell your age, so that's alright. First off, tell me what website you found our link on. Next...how is a fourteen year old a Junior in high school? I don't think so. Either raise her age to 16/17 or lower her grade to a Freshman. Your grammer...is very...well, bad. You need to work on it, but that's alright for now. When you put periods, only put spaces after them, not before and after. Tell more about her history. Tell how she reacted to her brother bring in the musical and what she was doing in the past two movies. Also, your history MUST be two paragaphs or more. Fix those things and I'll take another look.

[lizzbolton]

edited it

[Troy Bolton]

Your history must be TWO paragraphs. Also, the first movie is half of the school year and the second is the end of the SAME year.

[lizzbolton]

alright